The Fitzroy: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1538713376/the-fitzroyHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
846
Pledge Amount
£72,171
of £60,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 CrowdFunding TV - Crowdfunding Planning | Your Complete Solution for CrowdFunding |Planning for CrowdFunding the Smart Way sites.google.com set in an alternative post-apocalyptic 1950s on a submarine hotel.URL: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1538713376/the-fitzroy |
 Kickstarter: the crowdfunding site that wants to spark a creative revolution in the UK | Kickstarter | The Guardian www.theguardian.com|High Traffic The Fitzroy |
 Project of the Day: All Aboard the Hotel Submarine ‘The Fitzroy’ | IndieWire www.indiewire.com Kickstarter Page |
 25 interesting upcoming crowdfunded British films | Den of Geek www.denofgeek.com|High Traffic This apocalyptic boating holiday comedy earned a whopping £72,000 on Kickstarter . The Fitzroy has since been shot, with writer-director Andrew Harmer at the |
 Comedy film project The Fitzroy raises over £70,000 on Kickstarter - British Comedy Guide www.comedy.co.uk There is plenty of information aboutThe Fitzroyon the project's Kickstarter page |
General Sites
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 Forsaken Fortress, post-apoc survival RPG Kickstarter archive.nma-fallout.com http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/...76/the-fitzroy |
 Review: Hyde Park on Hudson (2012) | Next Projection Jan 1, 2021|nextprojection.com |
 CrowdFunding TV - Crowdfunding Planning | Your Complete Solution for CrowdFunding |Planning for CrowdFunding the Smart Way www.crowdfundingplanning.com set in an alternative post-apocalyptic 1950s on a submarine hotel.URL: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1538713376/the-fitzroy |
 Film Actually: 2012 www.film-actually.com For more information, click here: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1538713376/the-fitzroy?ref=ks |
 Project Spotlight #3 – The Fitzroy | The Great Escape thegreatesc.com |
The Fitzroy: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 1 | The title is too shortTITLE: 11 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 121 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.