The Drowning of Arthur Braxton: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fireflight/the-drowning-of-arthur-braxtonHyperstarter Score
36%
Good
Goal Status
Backers
4,118
Pledge Amount
£84,434.37
of £75,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Filming to start in Victoria Baths for 'The Drowning of Arthur Braxton' www.timeout.com of Arthur Braxton' on the project's Twitter , Facebook or Kickstarter page. |
 Don't Get Swept Up in the University Frenzy, It's Not for Everyone | HuffPost UK Students www.huffingtonpost.co.uk We launched a Kickstarter Appeal on 1st August to fund the making of the feature |
General Sites
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 Luke Cutforth Talks ‘The Drowning of Arthur Braxton’ – TenEighty — Internet culture in focus Aug 2, 2019|teneightymagazine.com £10,000 in the first hour. SupportThe Drowning of Arthur Braxtonvia Kickstarter . |
 How to Get Your Book made into a Movie: The Ultimate Guide of 2020 proactivewriter.com see the end figure by going to the Kickstarter page: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fireflight/the-drowning-of-arthur-braxton |
 The Ultimate Guide of 2020 (2022) agatin.com This video shows the reaction of Luke Cutforth, the director ofThe Drowning |
 How to Get Your Novel Made into a Film (2022) nymogi.com This video |
 Films | Caroline Cauchi Smailes carolinesmailes.co.uk The Successful Kickstarter Campaign |
The Drowning of Arthur Braxton: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 30 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 131 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are 677 wordsWORD COUNT: 677 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | There are 4 external linksLINK COUNT: 4 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | There are 20 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 20 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
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