STRIPPED: The Comics Documentary: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/smallfish/stripped-the-comics-documentaryHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
2,601
Pledge Amount
$109,025.58
of $58,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Cleared for stripping | The Economist www.economist.com In their first campaign Messrs Kellett and Schroeder raised $109,000 , twice their goal, and more than enough to cover |
 15 March 2013 | Techdirt www.techdirt.com documentary filmmakers, Dave Kellett & Fred Schroeder, used Kickstarter to raise $109,025 for their film,Stripped, all about the comics industry — covering |
 Code? What code? | MetaFilter www.metafilter.com BTW Dave is also the co-director of Stripped , an upcoming documentary about the decline of print/rise of |
 War Rocket Ajax #12: Scott Snyder on ‘Detective Comics’ and the Batman Relaunch [Podcast] Jun 2, 2019|comicsalliance.com Susan's Rec: Stripped: The Comics Documentary |
 AusGAF 3.0 - Double the price, region locked and refused classification | Page 362 | NeoGAF Aug 6, 2019|www.neogaf.com a remote interest in comics and doesn't put in to support this is a no-goodnik ne'er do-well. |
General Sites
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 The Comics Reporter www.comicsreporter.com more here |
 Fanbase Press - Barbra Dillon, Fanbase Press Editor-in-Chief fanbasepress.com of support demonstrated by the film's fans during its initial Kickstarter campaign , it is very likely thatSTRIPPEDwill do just that. |
 KickStarter - Kickstarter Watch. | Page 21 | rpgcodex > 20 god-damned years and still a work in progress rpgcodex.net $00,109,025 STRIPPED: The Comics Documentary |
 STRIPPED: the Comics Documentary - Onyx Path Forums forum.theonyxpath.com The Kickstarter Page with full details about the project! |
 Unshelved by Gene Ambaum and Bill Barnes www.unshelved.com light of day he needs all our help. Visit his Kickstarter to see a trailer, a list of the featured cartoonists, |
STRIPPED: The Comics Documentary: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 32 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 132 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.