Amoby - Transforming air everywhere: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/avirtual-amoby/amoby-transforming-air-everywhereHyperstarter Score
55%
Better
Goal Status
Backers
84
Pledge Amount
$41,934
of $40,000
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Amoby - Transforming air everywhere: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 35 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 2 | The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 55 Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly. |
 1 | There are 570 wordsWORD COUNT: 570 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | There are 15 external linksLINK COUNT: 15 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 5 | There are 47 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 47 Congratulations, this campaign has just the right number of images on the page. |
Suggested Improvements
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Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.